Music Video- First Draft WWW, EBI

What Went Well- I believe that in my music video I have portrayed the concept and message that I wished to in the music video. The theme of ' The Unknown ' is shown through the use of the extra footage shot around varies different locations. This not only allows the music video to be conventional but it also allows the audience to feel like they are the ones going to these locations. This also makes the video appealing and interesting for the audience to watch due to the various locations shots in the video.

What Went Well - One other thing that the music video consist of is the use of the lip-syncing. By having the artist lip-syncing it not only get the audience to know who the artist is they can also see and feel the expressions of the audience whilst watching the video.


Even Better If- So far in the music video it lacks enough viewing shots of the artist. To be able to make the music video relatable and appealing to the audience I would need to ensure that the audience sees the audience and the emotions that they are trying to portray.

Even Better If- Some of the footage that are seen in the music video are unclear and not defied to the best it could be. I think that in order for the audience to know and see the footage it would have to be clear and easy to see. In order to make this achievable I could try and make the image clearer or try and get a better footage of the video. I could also just replace the image.

Even Better If-  In some of the footage in the video I think that i may have just put it in there in order to make the music video, I have to think about the kind of footage I would like in the music video and when to place them, In order to do this I would have to plan what I'm going to put in the music video at what moment.